Monday, December 8, 2008
COLD!!
Wednesday, December 3, 2008
Paper
In am kind of nervous about getting my paper number three back because it is very important. I understand that this one is more important that we are writing now but if I did good on the third paper it gives me a little bit of room to breath on my last one. I am in the same situation with my crim paper because I really need to do well on it so that i don't have to do perfect on the final. I am stressing out already and I kind of wish we could just fast forward too the end of the semester because I have so much work that I have to get done and study for between now and than. Hopefully everything goes smoothly because they say you play as well as you do in school and I defiantly want to do well on the baseball field.
Tuesday, December 2, 2008
Team House Internet
Maryland has a lot of resources and nice facilities compared to other schools in other conferences. It is just that the other ACC schools in the conference have really nice stuff. I know some people that play at small division I programs or even division II and III that would love to have what we have but it makes it hard to compete in this conference with just nice stuff because we need great. The team house Internet is just one example about how the university does not care that much about typical non-revenue sports programs. Another big problem is that we are so far north and we don't get to practice year around like the more southern schools.
Finals!!
One of the best parts is that this is the last week of winter baseball so next week I will have a lot of time on my hands in order to get stuff done. One major problem is that the papers are due in the very beginning of the week so the time off will just help me study for finals not complete work for the last weeks of classes. I wish I could just fast forward these next couple weeks so that it will all be done and it will be Christmas time.
Monday, December 1, 2008
Great Break
Thanksgiving dinner was great though and it was good to get some good food instead of just eating at the expensive diner. I love to eat so I like all holidays because most have dinners with them. I espically enjoy thanksgiving though just because it is entirely about food which is great. It was also just good to be home and get away form this place for an extended period of time. A long story short I had a good break and I wish it was longer but Christmas is right around the corner.
Saturday, November 22, 2008
Football Game??
I guess I can watch pro football tomorrow and than by the time that Monday night football gets here I will be able to watch it from my own TV at home. I can not wait in till thanksgiving break because I get to sleep in my own bed and eat some good food. I am so tired of eating the same food around campus that I always do, not including I am out of dining hall points. Anyways for the most part I am severely disappointed in the football game here on campus and in the nation. At least maybe I will actually finish my paper that is due on Monday before Monday morning.
Flag Football Game
The other thing that the baseball team had today was a barbeque after the flag football game. The catch was that half the team got steaks while the other half got pb and j. The half that got steaks also got nicely cooked chicken too. We had a three game series at the end of our fall ball season that we call the world series and whoever wins get steaks and chicken while the other team only gets pb and j. I was on the winning team though so I did not care because I had a nice big and good lunch.
Football Game
This whole weekend all I casn think about is just getting out of here on Mondasy night and heading home. We have practice Monday night and than I am gone. Of course on Monday morning I have english class where I get to turn in paper number three. I can't wait!!
Tuesday, November 18, 2008
Basketball
I am not taking up for them at all because I believe they are going to struggle in a couple weeks also. I just don't believe it is fair to jump ship before even giving them a chance. It is not like they have really had a poor perform ace yet. They had one slow start but besides that give them a chance. I could see if you tell me this in a couple weeks but you might be surprised, don't judge a book by it's cover.
Thursday, November 13, 2008
project on the economy aka dining prices
All that they would have to do is adopt one of the ways other schools do it. One way is just charge you a certain amount each time you go in and make it buffet style. The other way is just have you pay a flat fee and than you can just go in as much as you want and whenever and it is free because you have already paid in advance. All of the other schools that I have been too do it like that but of course not Maryland.
Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Library???
I have heard from people that it is a great place to get stuff done so I actually might want to look into it. I sound like a horrible person I know but I do actually get my work done just not at the library. I am going to go this weekend and probably next week and hopefully it will count for my study hall hours. I think that these 15 sources are going to be really tough though.
Ralph
My prediction is that with our undefeated home record and playing a ranked team that it should be a good game. My guess it 21-14 we come out on top but maybe even better than that. If we were playing them at their place than I would give it to the by atleast 14 because we can't play on the road. They play this loud tape recording of a crowd like everyday while we are trying to practice baseball but it does not help.
Study Hall
It is much easier to write blogs now that it is actually quiet in this place. I usually just watch movies and stuff in here and than once my time is up go back to my room and get done what I have to get done. In the afternoon here I can count like a total of ten people in this place but from about 500 till about 900 is is really packed. The worst times are on Monday and Tuesday by far because everybody needs hours. I have come to realize that it is easier to just wait till later in the week. Now that fall ball for baseball is done it makes it easier to come in the afternoons.
Tuesday, November 11, 2008
English class cancelled
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COLD
Monday, November 3, 2008
Fall Ball is done
That is the only bad part about fall ball being done is that I have to spend more time around them at the place. I don't mind them on the field but when it comes to sitting around the place I can not stand even being around them at all. Anyways this week is awesome though because I don't have crim class and I don't have english. Also baseball is done so therefore I have a very free schedule. Lastly, this weekend I should be able to go home on Friday afternoon and enjoy my time away.
Friday, October 31, 2008
Voting
Monday, October 27, 2008
Cold Weather
Scheduling
Friday, October 24, 2008
1 week
RAIN
Monday, October 20, 2008
Mid Term
That is the really crappy part is that you could do all of this reading every week and than not even get any credit. I would strongly recommend that no body take this course because it is by far my worst class of the semester. I am sure that everyone here has a class like this one that you only have like two test that make up your entire grade. I am just trying to look over everything because I have no idea what he is going to put on the test because it is just so much material.
Wednesday, October 15, 2008
Rehotorical Journal Assignment #2
Journal Blog Assignment #2
In the article “Reforming Big Time College Sports” written by Tom Price, he uses an informative style of writing. His main focus is on how major colleges perform major recruiting violations. He just tells story after story of how a lot of major schools recruit illegally. Price’s main argument is that it is not morally correct to recruit illegally but everybody does it. I specifically remember him saying that only one school is not currently on probation for a recruiting violation. He uses some pathos because he even describes some of the things that went on like the school providing stripers and sex for recruit’s visits. He goes into that much detail so that he effects your emotions and you realize how wrong that really was to do.
He tries to gain credibility from the audience by using some articles from some very well respected sources. Price talks about the well-known Colorado scandal right in the beginning of the paper to gain credibility because most people have heard about that and have strong feelings about how horrible that was. That means that most people will have the same opinion as him on that specific topic. This type of writing is using ethos to gain credibility so that the audience trusts his opinion. He than continues on throughout the article to use logos in his writing because everything he says is factual and actually did happen.
He uses all of these rhetorical appeals to write in an informative style, which that hopefully the audience agrees with his opinion. He uses strictly factual information and violations that colleges actually committed to inform the audience about this serious problem.Weekend Off
First thing is that we have this weekend pretty much off which is like the frist one since I have been at college. Also another great thing is in November baseball cuts way back because all we do is lift like four days a week but no practice. So that will make for some great weekends plus I will have alot more time to get my school work done. Hopefully these next couple weeks go smoothly and than November will be here.
Wednesday, October 8, 2008
Baseball
Journal Assignment #1
Journal Assignment #1
“VW Unpimp-Drop it like it’s hot”
I choose the Volkswagen advertisement that is trying to sell one of their new model cars. I would say that the intended audience is a younger generation of people, most of the time people anywhere from a junior or senior in high school too people that are finishing up college or even working on their masters. If an age had to be set than I would say the intended audience is about the ages of 16-26. The purpose for this particular audience is because Volkswagen is putting the image that you are only cool if you drive this type of car. Most of the time people in that age group care about being cool. There is also one more type of audience that could be targeted by Volkswagen and that is just males in general because they put a good-looking girl in it, as some sex appeal. That could be any age male but I believe that the main intended audience is young people because of the “cool” factor.
I believe that the ad contains one major fallacy in this advertisement. It comes in the form of a logical fallacy, in that this ad is saying that you are only cool if you have this car. Volkswagen abuses the use of logos in that there are many cool cars out there and this one is by far not the only one. They don’t even give the other car in the ad a name; Volkswagen just calls it a what-you-ma-call-it. That right there is a logical fallacy because it might be true for some people but it is defiantly not completely true, there for it is a gimmick. They show the other car and than just slam the new one on top of the old one and don’t really give the audience a choice.
The main form of Rhetorical Appeal that I think Volkswagen used in their advertisement was pathos. Their main purpose was to try and effect the emotions of these young drivers. When the guy took the F off of the kid’s old car and said you fail than that was defiantly a form of pathos. The logical fallacy kind of ties in with the use of pathos because Volkswagen is saying you are not cool in less you drive their car and that is defiantly effecting your emotions. Volkswagen also used sex appeal because they had a good-looking girl in the advertisement and that is a form of pathos that directly affects males.
I also believe that Volkswagen uses ethos in this advertisement. They try to gain credibility through the intended audience by having the main guy in the clip attempt to talk in a “cool” way. This makes the audience say that this guy thinks like us so maybe we should listen to him and buy this “cool” car. That is ethos because they are trying to appeal to the younger age of car buyers so you have to gain credibility from them. If you talk in a real formal way with a bunch of statistics than you are not going to appeal to them at all. That is how I feel Volkswagen used some forms of Rhetorical Appeals in their advertisement.Monday, October 6, 2008
Dark
I wish it would go ahead and change because than we would be able to practice under the lights the majority of the time instead of just the very end. It am 18 years old and have played and practiced under the lights for years but it still feels so cool and special to practice under the lights even now. I feel just like a little kid again every time I get the chance to do it again. I am also in a criminology class right now and from the stuff that we have been learning I would imagine that the crime rate goes up the earlier it gets dark. So I guess that would be one motive to not setting the time back any earlier than you have too besides just the saving energy factor.
Friday, October 3, 2008
Alarms
I guess it is a good feature but it is extremley annoying when i am trying to sleep. I can't stand that noise because it sounds like a buglary at like a bank or something when the bank teller pushes the big red button. Anyways it is really annoying and I think that the choice of sounds is bad considering the only reason it goes off is because you prop open a door for a little bit of time.
Thursday, October 2, 2008
Long Practice
It is very fustrating because he already has said what he wanted to say but than he just starts talking to her himself talk. It is extremly boring because he repeats himself over and over not including that I think he just trys to drag it out so that practice is longer. He has a family at home with a wife and kids, you would think that he wants to get home and see them. I guess I think wrong because he continues to drag it out. That is not including that we don't get to eat because we have to get our hours in and the place closes at ten so you have no chice but to just run over to comcast and get signed in. That is enough of my rambling but I just need to vent because we had a useless long practice.
Tuesday, September 30, 2008
Library Worksheets?
I must say that I am looking foward to finding out how to do research in the library because I have papers due in my other classes and the library could become very useful. I don't have very much information for them so I really hope whoever gives us the lecture can really help us. I don't understand why the worksheets won't print but I am happy to be going to the library and I must say that is probably the first time that I have ever said that.
Monday, September 29, 2008
is fall ever going to come
This is crazy weather I am only from the eastern shore of Maryland so I am kind of used to it but I just wish it would stay summer or go ahead and switch to fall. Anyways it look like it is going to rain on tuesday which of course is a day that we have practice so it will probably mess up the schedule once again. but oh well.
Monday, September 22, 2008
Study Hall PACKED
Now that I am done complaining I will talk about how great Mondays have became for me. Monday is now our only day off for baseball so even though study hall sucks really bad atleast we get a day for our body's to relax and recover not including we don't have to wake up early. I used to hate monday's back in high school but now it has became my favorite day. Not including that Monday, Wednesday, and Friday are my easy day for classes so it just makes them all that much better. If everyday could be a innersquad game than I would not mind playing everyday and not even having a day off but it's not and we have to practice some. Thats why Monday's are now the best.
Sunday, September 21, 2008
First Scrimmage Game Of Season
We have twenty one innersquad games this fall and as long as they continue to build on today's solid performace than hopefully the spring will bring winning times. I would say that there was probably ten hits total by both teams but hopefully the more that we get to see live pitching the higher scoring and more interesting the games will become. The terps baseball program has been down in the past years but it does not help that the ACC is the best baseball conference in the country. So hopefully all goes well in the spring and we can win the ACC tournament. PS: Remember that I can't spell without spellcheck.
Guest Speaker
The best part of the whole night had to be when she sang her song that talked about getting involved in the community. She could actually sing very well and it kind of made the whole night worth it. The last part of the night that I have not talked about is when she had the entire theater close their eyes and visizualize. She like gave this setting and had you real relaxed and than told you to walk through this gate and see all of your dreams and asspirations. She said to do that everyday and it will signfintally help them come true. I think that she was a very good speaker and I am glad we got to be a part of it. PS: Remember that I can't spell.
Friday, September 19, 2008
In class wring assignment
I just feel that it takes a great tole on your body being a student athlete and you should deserve a few special privilages.
Thursday, September 18, 2008
Asian kid on Baseball team
We have a wide range of personalties on the team anywhere from real quiet, to real talkative, to really angry all of the time. I think that is going to really help us this year to make us succeded because you need a little bit from everybody in order to win championships. Also remember that I can't spell and there no spell check on this thing so please forgive me. Back to our team and how we are defiently going to win the ACC this year. The team had ups and downs last year and actually won thirty games so hopefully with this new good recruiting class than we can have a really successful year. Maybe even the asian kid can pitch in and help lead us the the ACC title and possibly even a national championship.
Wednesday, September 17, 2008
Late Night Dining Hall Food
My next point is that you don't really have much choice because at 10 o'clock at night there are not too many places that you can eat if any? I just know that late night is open and possibly the common shop if you just wanted to get a snack but it has extremley weird hours. They are open at all different times and somtimes they are the most random times I think that they could possibly think of. I think that the dining hall should change up the food some and they can keep the same type of stuff but just mix it up. What I mean is they can keep the snack stuff but there are way more options than just chicken wings and mozz sticks. In other words they should change there food or somebody with a kitchen could probably start making some good money if they want to serve a variety of good late night food.
Scooters
That also leads me to my next point of why America is so fat! If you are not an athlete than you should not have one because you need exerise! We are so lazy now days that we let technology take over our lives. I have seen real fat people riding around on them that I know that there is no way that they could be on a team. Are they really helping themselves? They are just adding to the statistics that America is ont of the fattest countries inot the fattest. All because they are too lazy to walk to the dining hall or even class. That is why I feel that scooters are good for some people but not for all of the people that I have been seeing ride them around campus.
Thursday, September 11, 2008
Baseball Practice
When I read I feel like I am wasting time because I am just learning a bunch of stuff that I will never need to use again. That goes for all books except for the english readings because it never hurts to know a little something about war (plus it is interesting) and you will always need to know how to write. Than there is baseball practice where you might not always need to be able to play ball but it never hurts to stay in shape. I want to be able to live the longest life possible and you enhance your chances be being physically fit. America as a whole is fat and I don't want to fit that stero type. That is why I believe baseball is much more important than reading. (Except of course English 101 reading assignments).
Study Hall
My next point that I am going to talk about is this blog assignment. I am finally starting to get the hang of it. I am still not sure if you are just suppose to type random stuff like this and post it or not. Anyways I think that this assignment is so much better than having to write it even with all of the problems in the begining. The only problem is that it does not have spell check and I am a horrible speller as you can probably already tell. My paper usually looks like a christmas tree when I get done typing it because there is so many errors. So that is the only complaint that I have about this assignment now that it is working correctly.
Wednesday, September 10, 2008
Dinner
If anybody is bored enough to read this and want to comment than please tell me how this blog thing works. I do not know how to do anything except type in this box and than hit post. So even if you do comment I am probably not going to know how to read it. Also if anybody else out there is occuring any of these problems than please comment and tell me so I will feel a little better. That is if you know how to comment on somebody elses writing. I personally do not even know how to look at somebodys blog. Anyways the main purpose of this post was to say that the stamp food is really good so if you have not been there to eat than you should.
Monday, September 8, 2008
2.I have not done much writing as you can probably tell but I did some arguemative writing in high school. I do not write very much out of class besides a grocery list.
3.I usually write a paper starting with a outline and than a rough draft following with some editing. Than at the very end I get to my final finished paper. I think that writing the rough draft is the hardest because you don't have much to work with besides some thoughts on a piece of paper.
4.I like to just write a short story or something that you make up and make it interesting and funny. I get satisfaction out of that because it something that I did on my own that a teacher did not make me do.
5.The longest paper that I have had to write was my junior year english paper it is was like 9 pages. I prepared for it by doing the most research that I could to get ready for it. I learned from that experience to not procrastnate.
6.The one and only thing that sticks out to me about being useful is the use of notecards for writing down your research. I also think that outlines are pretty useful.
7.I think I am good at staring papers but than i feel I am really bad at ending them. I think I could defiently use some help with the end of my body in the paper and than the conclusion.
8.I think I will need the most support with constructing my rough draft because that is where I feel that I struggle because just looking at a outline does not help me much.
9.I would probably write about steriods because I feel that is a very easy but popular topic to write on these days.
10.I love to argue I am just like anybody else I think I am always right. I enjoy to write papers where I can argue my point. I think arguing is just when two sides disagree and they decide their case through an argument.
Friday, September 5, 2008
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Natalie Corbin
I'm currently an Instructor for the English Department at the University of Maryland. This semester, I am teaching two courses: one section of Engl 101, and one section of Engl 101X. Additionally, I am currently pursuing my Masters of Fine Arts in Poetry. View my complete profile
Thursday, September 4, 2008
Your First Blog Assignment!
Dearest Students. Upon creating your blogs, please complete this survey/self-assessment as your first blog assignment. Please copy the survey, complete it, and post it to your blog by 11:59 PM Sunday, September 7th.Best!NatalieWriting Autobiography and Self-AssessmentINSTRUCTIONS: Please share a little about yourself as a writer. Use the questions below as “invention” questions to stimulate your thinking, and post the answers to your blog. Write in complete sentences, using as many specific details as you can recall. At the same time, write quickly, without interrupting yourself to revise. This assignment calls for an informal, personal response, so it will not be graded for grammatical correctness. However, note that you may be sharing this information with the public through your blog, so it does need to be readable and not overly personal.1. Introduce yourself briefly. Where are you from? Where have you gone to school? What educational plans brought you to the University of Maryland, and what fields of learning or potential majors interest you at this stage in your academic career?2. What kinds of writing have you done in high school? At UMD? At another college? Outside of a school setting?3. What steps do you usually follow when you write a paper? Do you outline? Revise? Compose on a word processor? What part of the writing process do you find easiest? What part do you find hardest?4. What kind of writing has given you the most satisfaction?5. What is the longest or most challenging paper you have ever had to write? How did you go about preparing and writing it? What did you learn about writing from that experience?6. What do you remember learning about writing from other courses or other writing experiences that you found useful?7. Assess your strengths and weaknesses as a writer. What are you good at? What aspects of your writing are you dissatisfied with?8. What part of the writing process do you think you will need the most support with?9. If you had your choice of subjects for a research project, what issues or topics would you like to write about?10. What do you associate with the term argument? How do you feel about taking a course that focuses on argumentation?
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Thursday, August 28, 2008
Welcome!
Hello, hello! Welcome to my blog for English 101 at the University of Maryland. If you are one of my students, please link this blog to your own blog, since I will be using this blog to post prompts, assignments, and other useful information. I'll also throw some fun stuff in here, from time to time. Let the blogging commence!
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